With each read of this, I can't help but think its a cheap rip-off of mine, and Pringles week-recap (ie. using pros, and cons, and the name, along with similar rundown). It's obvious you take some considerable time to write this up. It'd help greatly though, if you put alot more of your own opinion into. There are some glaring grammar issues, that makes it hard to read at times, just means you need to proofread it a couple more times. I'd really like to see you write about one of the topics in full length. See what you bring to the table, with a different topic, and/or format. You have good sense, dude, so keep writing, and take all this criticism to hand, and apply it. Read you next time.

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